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Friday, January 9, 2009

Poetry Friday: Thoughtlessness, a haiku


Sorry for the sadness, everyone. These things do happen. *sigh*

Poetry Friday

Thoughtlessness

A word creaks open
her soul and freezes the hopes
like winter's whisper.

Lorie Ann Grover, 2009

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7 comments:

  1. I love the line "a word creaks open." Very nice! I think we've all had that feeling.

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  2. You captured the feeling perfectly! Thank you for sharing with us.

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  3. I'm absolutely stunned and blown away by this.

    This is a gift, a package of beautiful images and a subtle gold chain tied together with ribbon.

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  4. Writers in this tough business can relate! Great word choices!

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  5. I'm stunned by your thoughtful comments. Really. Thank you!

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