Okay, both of these popped out. Which is stronger to you? Thanks! And thanks to my daughter who took the photo. :~)
Suspended
The gulls
hang in the air;
buoyed on our laughter,
they weave their squeals
into our moment.
Caught
The gulls trap time.
Buoyed on our laughter,
they float
above our astonishment.
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Suspended is stronger to me, although both poems are wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThe first one, def. Love it!
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