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Friday, January 13, 2012

Poetry Friday: In the Gust


In the Gust

Brittle leaves whirl down,
black birds take wing, flapping up,
rising through the fall.


haiku and art by Lorie Ann Grover, 2012

2 comments:

  1. Oh yes, I love that last line. contrast, movement, grace. Yes!

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  2. The bird-leaves, blue-gray background and scrapey tree-trunk made me sad. But that's just my way of saying I liked your haiku. xo

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