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Friday, May 18, 2012

Poetry Friday: Yellow Raft


Yellow Raft

In braces and braids, 
our laughter bobs, then and now,
with you at my back.

by Lorie Ann Grover, 2012
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5 comments:

  1. JoyMay 18, 2012 at 10:48 AM

    I like this one.
    The layers of meaning are wonderful.
    More, more, please.

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  2. TabathaMay 18, 2012 at 11:27 AM

    Lovely!

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  3. RuthMay 18, 2012 at 7:00 PM

    Why is it saying I'm anonymous?

    Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com

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  4. RuthMay 18, 2012 at 7:01 PM

    Hmmm...Sorry about that. My first comment came out "Anonymous." Then I left another one explaining, and the anonymous one disappeared.

    In any case, I just wanted to say your haiku is perfect with the photo.

    Slinking away now, after my commenting blitz.

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  5. Mary LeeMay 20, 2012 at 4:15 AM

    True dat -- it's family and friends who keep us afloat.

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