beautiful.
Beautiful, and arresting. Well done!
Wow, you've said so much here. The word "crippled" was unexpected and sent me back to the beginning again. Really nice job!
The self sacrifice for art...
Nicely done. This seems like it could be part of a larger haiku story-poem, or the opening to a short story. (It seems you could say quite a bit more!)
Goodness gracious, true.
Love crippled and perfect--about the same thing! And...ouch.
beautiful.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, and arresting. Well done!
ReplyDeleteWow, you've said so much here. The word "crippled" was unexpected and sent me back to the beginning again. Really nice job!
ReplyDeleteThe self sacrifice for art...
ReplyDeleteNicely done. This seems like it could be part of a larger haiku story-poem, or the opening to a short story. (It seems you could say quite a bit more!)
ReplyDeleteGoodness gracious, true.
ReplyDeleteLove crippled and perfect--about the same thing! And...ouch.
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