Ooooh, the arthritic bones clicking makes me wince and smile at the same time. Don't you love public art? Thanks for the strong senses in this short form.
I can hear the clicking of these branches as the wind blows. I'm glad they inspired you to write a haiku!
"Clicking" is the perfect word! Do you feel writing inspires you to pay closer attention to the world around you? It seems as though you are very good at really *seeing* things.
MY answer to Tabatha's question would be, "Yes." And because I haven't been writing as much this month, my *seeing* is also suffering!
OMG, they did this on the UF campus here in Gainesville too. I saw it earlier this spring-- very cool. But not as cool as your haiku. Love the arthritic bones... what a great imagination you have!
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